Comments on: JWAM reader request no. 21: Learning from the writing of others http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2009/01/27/jwam-reader-request-no-21-learning-from-the-writing-of-others/ writing, reading, eating, drinking, sport Thu, 09 Feb 2012 07:42:52 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Mary Elizabeth S. http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2009/01/27/jwam-reader-request-no-21-learning-from-the-writing-of-others/comment-page-1/#comment-75354 Mary Elizabeth S. Wed, 28 Jan 2009 06:01:11 +0000 http://justinelarbalestier.com/?p=3037#comment-75354 Thank you! That makes very good sense. I'm going to have to try this out on a couple of books, in hopes that it will help me figure out why it is that they grab me so fast and firm. And now I want to read Exile. Very, very much. ~Mary Thank you! That makes very good sense. I’m going to have to try this out on a couple of books, in hopes that it will help me figure out why it is that they grab me so fast and firm.

And now I want to read Exile. Very, very much.

~Mary

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]]> By: marrije http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2009/01/27/jwam-reader-request-no-21-learning-from-the-writing-of-others/comment-page-1/#comment-75327 marrije Tue, 27 Jan 2009 13:12:22 +0000 http://justinelarbalestier.com/?p=3037#comment-75327 ooh, reading a book backwards, that's a great one! thanks for that. and also for this wonderful dissection of how these paragraphs work - makes me want to go out and buy the book :-) ooh, reading a book backwards, that’s a great one! thanks for that. and also for this wonderful dissection of how these paragraphs work – makes me want to go out and buy the book :-)

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