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	<title>Comments on: What Ally Carter said</title>
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		<title>By: Justine</title>
		<link>http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2008/09/23/what-ally-carter-said/comment-page-1/#comment-72792</link>
		<dc:creator>Justine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2008 12:33:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Elodie: Fixed. And, yes, no one expects to be able to dunk straight away. They get that athletes train so why don&#039;t they get that writers do too?

It was George Bernard Shaw who said that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Elodie: Fixed. And, yes, no one expects to be able to dunk straight away. They get that athletes train so why don&#8217;t they get that writers do too?</p>
<p>It was George Bernard Shaw who said that.</p>
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		<title>By: Elodie</title>
		<link>http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2008/09/23/what-ally-carter-said/comment-page-1/#comment-72790</link>
		<dc:creator>Elodie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Sep 2008 11:54:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>( Are their sentences/chapter/sub-plots that could do with cutting and or trimming?  
This should be a there. just nitpicking.)

This is such a good post, and so true.  You don&#039;t see sports people that go &quot;oh, I wanted to run the marathon, but I tried once and didn&#039;t get past a mile.&quot; o.O You practice! 
Also about the shortening a long novel.... it reminds me of, I forget, maybe Emerson? Who once wrote a letter that started with &quot;I didn&#039;t have time to write you a short letter, so I wrote you a long one.&quot;  It takes a lot more work in my opinion figuring out how to cut out the boring and keep all the information in a shorter text than to just write a long book.  And it&#039;s what makes the difference between good idea and good novel.  (well, not that some long ones aren&#039;t good, but they&#039;ve had the same kind of work done on them--they&#039;re long instead of super-long!)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>( Are their sentences/chapter/sub-plots that could do with cutting and or trimming?<br />
This should be a there. just nitpicking.)</p>
<p>This is such a good post, and so true.  You don&#8217;t see sports people that go &#8220;oh, I wanted to run the marathon, but I tried once and didn&#8217;t get past a mile.&#8221; o.O You practice!<br />
Also about the shortening a long novel&#8230;. it reminds me of, I forget, maybe Emerson? Who once wrote a letter that started with &#8220;I didn&#8217;t have time to write you a short letter, so I wrote you a long one.&#8221;  It takes a lot more work in my opinion figuring out how to cut out the boring and keep all the information in a shorter text than to just write a long book.  And it&#8217;s what makes the difference between good idea and good novel.  (well, not that some long ones aren&#8217;t good, but they&#8217;ve had the same kind of work done on them&#8211;they&#8217;re long instead of super-long!)</p>
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		<title>By: Amy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Amy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 17:43:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;Well, it didn’t sell, they’ll tell me. THEN WRITE ANOTHER ONE. If you’ve written the book and it’s as good as you can make it then move on to the next one.&lt;/i&gt;

That&#039;s what Jane Austen did. Her first novel, &quot;First Impressions&quot; never sold. Years later she rewrote it and it sold under a new name: &quot;Pride and Prejudice.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>Well, it didn’t sell, they’ll tell me. THEN WRITE ANOTHER ONE. If you’ve written the book and it’s as good as you can make it then move on to the next one.</i></p>
<p>That&#8217;s what Jane Austen did. Her first novel, &#8220;First Impressions&#8221; never sold. Years later she rewrote it and it sold under a new name: &#8220;Pride and Prejudice.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Justine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Justine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 16:53:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>marrije: Nothing better has been written. Slushkiller for the gold!

strugglingwriter: You&#039;re welome. I struggled for almost twenty years before I was published: &quot;Never give up, never surrender!&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>marrije: Nothing better has been written. Slushkiller for the gold!</p>
<p>strugglingwriter: You&#8217;re welome. I struggled for almost twenty years before I was published: &#8220;Never give up, never surrender!&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: strugglingwriter</title>
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		<dc:creator>strugglingwriter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 14:01:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks you so much for this Justine.  It&#039;s something I really needed to hear today.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks you so much for this Justine.  It&#8217;s something I really needed to hear today.</p>
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		<title>By: Don&#8217;t Give Up! &#171; The Struggling Writer</title>
		<link>http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2008/09/23/what-ally-carter-said/comment-page-1/#comment-72776</link>
		<dc:creator>Don&#8217;t Give Up! &#171; The Struggling Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 13:51:14 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] I came across Justine Larbalestier&#8217;s post on asking the wrong questions about writing. The gist of the post is &#8220;Write the book first.&#8221;. &#8220;Writing comes first. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] I came across Justine Larbalestier&#8217;s post on asking the wrong questions about writing. The gist of the post is &#8220;Write the book first.&#8221;. &#8220;Writing comes first. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: marrije</title>
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		<dc:creator>marrije</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 23 Sep 2008 07:17:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Haha, I knew the &quot;ninety-five percent&quot; link went to Making Light before I even moused over it. This should tell you something about me reading lots about marketing before actually well and truly finishing the writing of my own proper books. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Haha, I knew the &#8220;ninety-five percent&#8221; link went to Making Light before I even moused over it. This should tell you something about me reading lots about marketing before actually well and truly finishing the writing of my own proper books. <img src='http://justinelarbalestier.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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