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		<title>By: CB James</title>
		<link>http://justinelarbalestier.com/blog/2008/08/06/contract-with-the-reader/comment-page-1/#comment-71969</link>
		<dc:creator>CB James</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Aug 2008 16:36:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think a writer who believes she owes nothing to her readers does so at her own peril.  Who&#039;s buying your books?  Who&#039;s paying the piper? The audience may not get to call the tune, but we will choose the musicians. 

I&#039;ve always heard that Charles Dickens changed the ending to The Old Curiosity Shop becuase his audience demanded it.  I&#039;ll grant that it&#039;s not one of his better books, but if paying attention to your audience was important to Charles Dickens.....  The man knew what he was doing.

This is a fascinating series of comments, by the way.  You always get such interesting discussions going here.  I&#039;m jealous.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think a writer who believes she owes nothing to her readers does so at her own peril.  Who&#8217;s buying your books?  Who&#8217;s paying the piper? The audience may not get to call the tune, but we will choose the musicians. </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve always heard that Charles Dickens changed the ending to The Old Curiosity Shop becuase his audience demanded it.  I&#8217;ll grant that it&#8217;s not one of his better books, but if paying attention to your audience was important to Charles Dickens&#8230;..  The man knew what he was doing.</p>
<p>This is a fascinating series of comments, by the way.  You always get such interesting discussions going here.  I&#8217;m jealous.</p>
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		<title>By: Steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>Steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 09 Aug 2008 23:42:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m curious about what you didn&#039;t like about the seventh season of Buffy. Most Buffy fans don&#039;t seem to like that one. I feel like I&#039;m a total minority in liking it...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m curious about what you didn&#8217;t like about the seventh season of Buffy. Most Buffy fans don&#8217;t seem to like that one. I feel like I&#8217;m a total minority in liking it&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Jody</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jody</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 08 Aug 2008 03:51:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Seriously, it&#039;s hard to imagine the pressure Meyer must have felt when so many were so passionate about the first three books. As a writer myself, I aspire to such rock star pressures, but it must also be maddening, like having an angry and adoring mob lined up outside your writing space. I think if a writer can filter that noise out, she&#039;s more likely to avoid early death and/or insanity.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Seriously, it&#8217;s hard to imagine the pressure Meyer must have felt when so many were so passionate about the first three books. As a writer myself, I aspire to such rock star pressures, but it must also be maddening, like having an angry and adoring mob lined up outside your writing space. I think if a writer can filter that noise out, she&#8217;s more likely to avoid early death and/or insanity.</p>
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		<title>By: Hillary!</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hillary!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 08 Aug 2008 01:15:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As a fan I agree with you as a writer.</description>
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		<title>By: Dawn</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dawn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 17:50:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Justine! It&#039;s been such a long time since I&#039;ve read your blog/ commented on your blog in general. I feel so bad! Ever since I&#039;ve gotten home from school I&#039;ve just been out of the blogosphere. 

I agree with you completely. The writer does not owe the reader anything! In fact, I know that from my own experience, sometimes even I feel cheated by the story that is being written. Characters are who they are. Sometimes they do stupid things and you just want to scream at them, but the writer shouldn&#039;t feel the need to change someone because they think that their audience might expect something else. 

My characters are almost-living, almost-breathing people. I can&#039;t change them or their actions any more than I can change anyone else&#039;s who I see on a daily basis.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Justine! It&#8217;s been such a long time since I&#8217;ve read your blog/ commented on your blog in general. I feel so bad! Ever since I&#8217;ve gotten home from school I&#8217;ve just been out of the blogosphere. </p>
<p>I agree with you completely. The writer does not owe the reader anything! In fact, I know that from my own experience, sometimes even I feel cheated by the story that is being written. Characters are who they are. Sometimes they do stupid things and you just want to scream at them, but the writer shouldn&#8217;t feel the need to change someone because they think that their audience might expect something else. </p>
<p>My characters are almost-living, almost-breathing people. I can&#8217;t change them or their actions any more than I can change anyone else&#8217;s who I see on a daily basis.</p>
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		<title>By: Liz B</title>
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		<dc:creator>Liz B</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 14:51:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Authors don&#039;t owe fans anything in terms of plot or characters; but likewise, fans -- and readers -- don&#039;t owe anything to authors.

Authors do owe something to the story they are telling. For the final season(s) of BTVS, it was pretty evident that Joss&#039;s attentions were elsewhere. As mentioned above, part of the problem with VM was Rob not being let alone to tell his story, but trying to meet network requests. The main times I&#039;ve been angry at how a book turns out or is told, its usually because it gets too messagey or someone acts out of character or it feels rushed. 

And fans owe it to the author and creator to let the story be told -- to realize that the resolution of the story isn&#039;t going to fit what the fan wants or their individual needs.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Authors don&#8217;t owe fans anything in terms of plot or characters; but likewise, fans &#8212; and readers &#8212; don&#8217;t owe anything to authors.</p>
<p>Authors do owe something to the story they are telling. For the final season(s) of BTVS, it was pretty evident that Joss&#8217;s attentions were elsewhere. As mentioned above, part of the problem with VM was Rob not being let alone to tell his story, but trying to meet network requests. The main times I&#8217;ve been angry at how a book turns out or is told, its usually because it gets too messagey or someone acts out of character or it feels rushed. </p>
<p>And fans owe it to the author and creator to let the story be told &#8212; to realize that the resolution of the story isn&#8217;t going to fit what the fan wants or their individual needs.</p>
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		<title>By: deborahb</title>
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		<dc:creator>deborahb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 06:04:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larbalestier!! *shakes fist* I&#039;m sure you owe me SOMETHING!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larbalestier!! *shakes fist* I&#8217;m sure you owe me SOMETHING!!</p>
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		<title>By: Brent</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brent</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 04:10:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Separate thought, separate post.

Art is communication.  Writing even more so than most I believe.  I&#039;ve met &quot;artistes&quot; that slop paint on canvas and say it&#039;s the viewer&#039;s fault they don&#039;t &quot;get&quot; it.  I&#039;ve read poetry that is similar.  It fails to communicate.  There&#039;s no message, theme, or point.

In a novel, there should be a story.  I think that a writer owes the reader a story if they&#039;re writing a story.  If I want an action-adventure film, I don&#039;t go to the History section.  If I want a history book, I don&#039;t look under Fiction.  If I want a STORY, then I look for stories.  If a writer gives me something else, I&#039;m going to be upset with them.

In a series, the hardest task is to give new content without devaluing or departing from the old material.  An author doesn&#039;t OWE the readers a better-than-the-last book each and every time, but they should try.  A series ending should be at least as good as the beginning, and should BE an ending.  But the author doesn&#039;t OWE the readers that, it&#039;s just good manners.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Separate thought, separate post.</p>
<p>Art is communication.  Writing even more so than most I believe.  I&#8217;ve met &#8220;artistes&#8221; that slop paint on canvas and say it&#8217;s the viewer&#8217;s fault they don&#8217;t &#8220;get&#8221; it.  I&#8217;ve read poetry that is similar.  It fails to communicate.  There&#8217;s no message, theme, or point.</p>
<p>In a novel, there should be a story.  I think that a writer owes the reader a story if they&#8217;re writing a story.  If I want an action-adventure film, I don&#8217;t go to the History section.  If I want a history book, I don&#8217;t look under Fiction.  If I want a STORY, then I look for stories.  If a writer gives me something else, I&#8217;m going to be upset with them.</p>
<p>In a series, the hardest task is to give new content without devaluing or departing from the old material.  An author doesn&#8217;t OWE the readers a better-than-the-last book each and every time, but they should try.  A series ending should be at least as good as the beginning, and should BE an ending.  But the author doesn&#8217;t OWE the readers that, it&#8217;s just good manners.  <img src='http://justinelarbalestier.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Brent</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brent</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 03:58:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think an author has a contract to be themselves when they write.  By that, I mean an author ought not put out junk that is beneath their ability simply to satisfy greed.  Nor should they water down their scenes, characters, or stories to make their work more &quot;marketable.&quot;  An author can explore new genres and styles (please do!) and shouldn&#039;t feel beholden to whatever genre or style first got them notoriety.

An author doesn&#039;t have to move onto something new when they&#039;ve totally said everything they can possibly say on the old subjects... but I personally would appreciate it.  I&#039;ll let you know if/when you approach that (we&#039;ll check in a dozen books or so).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think an author has a contract to be themselves when they write.  By that, I mean an author ought not put out junk that is beneath their ability simply to satisfy greed.  Nor should they water down their scenes, characters, or stories to make their work more &#8220;marketable.&#8221;  An author can explore new genres and styles (please do!) and shouldn&#8217;t feel beholden to whatever genre or style first got them notoriety.</p>
<p>An author doesn&#8217;t have to move onto something new when they&#8217;ve totally said everything they can possibly say on the old subjects&#8230; but I personally would appreciate it.  I&#8217;ll let you know if/when you approach that (we&#8217;ll check in a dozen books or so).</p>
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		<title>By: Serafina Zane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Serafina Zane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 03:42:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Also, I totally know what you mean in the footnote. I was practically incoherent when I was working on my novel climax. It was no doubt lots of fun for everyone around me. I kept asking what common things were called and speaking in a varied combination of runons that lost their original meaning and fragments that never meant anything in the first place.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Also, I totally know what you mean in the footnote. I was practically incoherent when I was working on my novel climax. It was no doubt lots of fun for everyone around me. I kept asking what common things were called and speaking in a varied combination of runons that lost their original meaning and fragments that never meant anything in the first place.</p>
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		<title>By: Bill</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bill</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 01:02:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Authors owe readers one thing. You owe us AWESOME. That&#039;s how you became our favorite authors in the first place, not by being some literary short-order cook who serves us the burgers and fries we ordered.

Readers should have NO influence over the details of said awesome. If they have such good ideas, let them write their own damn books. And if their books kick ass, then they&#039;ll have fans of their own. Fair is fair.

Does anybody really believe Stephanie Meyer got 3 books in and said &quot;Now I&#039;m going to ruin this for everybody!&quot; She made it as awesome as she could and then gave it to the world, which is an act of supreme courage, whether it pleases everybody or not.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Authors owe readers one thing. You owe us AWESOME. That&#8217;s how you became our favorite authors in the first place, not by being some literary short-order cook who serves us the burgers and fries we ordered.</p>
<p>Readers should have NO influence over the details of said awesome. If they have such good ideas, let them write their own damn books. And if their books kick ass, then they&#8217;ll have fans of their own. Fair is fair.</p>
<p>Does anybody really believe Stephanie Meyer got 3 books in and said &#8220;Now I&#8217;m going to ruin this for everybody!&#8221; She made it as awesome as she could and then gave it to the world, which is an act of supreme courage, whether it pleases everybody or not.</p>
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		<title>By: Catherine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Catherine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 00:51:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t know what everyone&#039;s problem is. I thought breaking dawn was awesome. I loved it. My friends loved it. I&#039;m very confuzzled.

I&#039;m of two minds on this too. I don&#039;t want my favorite authors to write a book that is what I expect it to be. I want to be surprised. I think people came up with theories, got attached to them, and then were disappointed when they were wrong. So, they blame Stephanie Meyer. I think she wrote a great book that nearly had me calling in sick to work so I could stay home and read. I only went cause I remembered the four pairs of shoes that I just bought. (Curse my shoe addiction!)

As for the seventh Harry Potter, I did have my theories, but I was disappointed when I got it right. Because if I got it right, it was what I expected and I wasn&#039;t surprised. Although I&#039;ll admit there was a smug &quot;Ha! I figured it out&quot; feeling when I did get something right, the surprises were much more fun.

At the same time though, I totally agree that creators of Veronica Mars owe me for what they did to that show. I also think the creators of Gilmore Girls owe me a new ending to the show. Maybe writers of books owe their readers nothing, but creators of TV shows owe their viewers everything? Although that seems discriminatory. Ah well. It&#039;s the best I can come up with thanks to the amount of tea I&#039;ve had today.

~Catherine</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t know what everyone&#8217;s problem is. I thought breaking dawn was awesome. I loved it. My friends loved it. I&#8217;m very confuzzled.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m of two minds on this too. I don&#8217;t want my favorite authors to write a book that is what I expect it to be. I want to be surprised. I think people came up with theories, got attached to them, and then were disappointed when they were wrong. So, they blame Stephanie Meyer. I think she wrote a great book that nearly had me calling in sick to work so I could stay home and read. I only went cause I remembered the four pairs of shoes that I just bought. (Curse my shoe addiction!)</p>
<p>As for the seventh Harry Potter, I did have my theories, but I was disappointed when I got it right. Because if I got it right, it was what I expected and I wasn&#8217;t surprised. Although I&#8217;ll admit there was a smug &#8220;Ha! I figured it out&#8221; feeling when I did get something right, the surprises were much more fun.</p>
<p>At the same time though, I totally agree that creators of Veronica Mars owe me for what they did to that show. I also think the creators of Gilmore Girls owe me a new ending to the show. Maybe writers of books owe their readers nothing, but creators of TV shows owe their viewers everything? Although that seems discriminatory. Ah well. It&#8217;s the best I can come up with thanks to the amount of tea I&#8217;ve had today.</p>
<p>~Catherine</p>
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		<title>By: Serafina Zane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Serafina Zane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Aug 2008 00:02:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Writers don&#039;t owe the readers anything, but they owe the STORY something. Which is why endings that feel like they did a 180---whether to please the fans or not---just don&#039;t work for me. Write the ending it&#039;s supposed to have, and if you&#039;ve written the book supposed to go with that ending, it should be at least sort of satisfying. I mean, some endings might make me angry and sad and distraught, but if it fits the tone of the book I usually don&#039;t feel betrayed. I love lots of series that end with tradgedy or character death (*cough Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud, Dark Reflections Trilogy by Kai Meyer, Gemma Doyle Trilogy by Libba Bray cough*), because I agree it was the right ending and because they were well-done. 

Sure, not everyone always sees eye-to-eye, so there&#039;ll always be people who hate it, and everyone reads the book with something different in mind, but I think that an ending tacked-on to a very different feeling book---be it happy OR sad, just doesn&#039;t work. 
Which is why a lot of the endings most protested are the ones of series or TV shows stretched out for longer than they were originally planned. 

Also, I kind of liked Season Seven of Buffy, which I actually only finished watching today. Well-plotted if single-minded, and quite the improvement on Season Six, in my opinion.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Writers don&#8217;t owe the readers anything, but they owe the STORY something. Which is why endings that feel like they did a 180&#8212;whether to please the fans or not&#8212;just don&#8217;t work for me. Write the ending it&#8217;s supposed to have, and if you&#8217;ve written the book supposed to go with that ending, it should be at least sort of satisfying. I mean, some endings might make me angry and sad and distraught, but if it fits the tone of the book I usually don&#8217;t feel betrayed. I love lots of series that end with tradgedy or character death (*cough Bartimaeus Trilogy by Jonathan Stroud, Dark Reflections Trilogy by Kai Meyer, Gemma Doyle Trilogy by Libba Bray cough*), because I agree it was the right ending and because they were well-done. </p>
<p>Sure, not everyone always sees eye-to-eye, so there&#8217;ll always be people who hate it, and everyone reads the book with something different in mind, but I think that an ending tacked-on to a very different feeling book&#8212;be it happy OR sad, just doesn&#8217;t work.<br />
Which is why a lot of the endings most protested are the ones of series or TV shows stretched out for longer than they were originally planned. </p>
<p>Also, I kind of liked Season Seven of Buffy, which I actually only finished watching today. Well-plotted if single-minded, and quite the improvement on Season Six, in my opinion.</p>
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		<title>By: Justine</title>
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		<dc:creator>Justine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 22:49:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow. What a conversation to emerge from teh bunker and find. Youse lot are awesome! (Except Deb B. I owe you especially NOTHING!)

I keep starting responses and then someone else has said what I was going to say further along. Bless!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow. What a conversation to emerge from teh bunker and find. Youse lot are awesome! (Except Deb B. I owe you especially NOTHING!)</p>
<p>I keep starting responses and then someone else has said what I was going to say further along. Bless!</p>
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		<title>By: Kelly McCullough</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kelly McCullough</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 20:34:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As both an author and reader I feel that there is an implicit contract between the two. When an experienced reader picks up a story they do so with a number of implicit expectations which form a contract of sorts between the reader and the writer (this is true of all genres but I&#039;m an f&amp;sf writer so I&#039;ll focus there).

The reader expects that the story will be about something. They expect that there will be clues and foreshadowing that will point toward the ending. They expect that the author won&#039;t introduce things into the denouement that were not introduced or implied somewhere earlier in the story. They expect things to conform to the general rules and tropes of the genre or for deviations to be explained at some point.

The reader needs to have some idea what to watch and watch for, or they will become increasingly unhappy over the course of the story, and downright irate if the rug is suddenly jerked out from under them somewhere along the line by huge unexplained deviation from expectation.

Now, it&#039;s possible to successfully violate every single expectation of the implicit, but it has to be done consciously and extremely well or the book is likely to make a ballistic arc and lose the author a reader, certainly for that story and possibly forever.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As both an author and reader I feel that there is an implicit contract between the two. When an experienced reader picks up a story they do so with a number of implicit expectations which form a contract of sorts between the reader and the writer (this is true of all genres but I&#8217;m an f&amp;sf writer so I&#8217;ll focus there).</p>
<p>The reader expects that the story will be about something. They expect that there will be clues and foreshadowing that will point toward the ending. They expect that the author won&#8217;t introduce things into the denouement that were not introduced or implied somewhere earlier in the story. They expect things to conform to the general rules and tropes of the genre or for deviations to be explained at some point.</p>
<p>The reader needs to have some idea what to watch and watch for, or they will become increasingly unhappy over the course of the story, and downright irate if the rug is suddenly jerked out from under them somewhere along the line by huge unexplained deviation from expectation.</p>
<p>Now, it&#8217;s possible to successfully violate every single expectation of the implicit, but it has to be done consciously and extremely well or the book is likely to make a ballistic arc and lose the author a reader, certainly for that story and possibly forever.</p>
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		<title>By: pixelfish</title>
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		<dc:creator>pixelfish</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 19:51:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the author owes the reader nothing specific. I do think it behooves them to try and maintain a certain level of consistency with their characters. This is why For Better or For Worse has been pissing me off for the last few years though....Lynn Johnston went to all the trouble to establish her character, Liz, as an independent soul, craving a little adventure, and then after setting her up with guy (even using one of her trademark puns to set him up as Mr. &quot;Right&quot; Wright) she then reused a plot line to break them up and return Liz to her white-bread, picket fence suburbia. This cried out against all the character building she&#039;d done previously, and a lot of fans were pissed and annoyed.  Granted, it&#039;s LJ&#039;s story to write, but it was treading old ground and messing with established character traits.

I&#039;ve also seen writers get really focused on their IDEA, to the point where they shoe-horn the character in to fit the story. Or people who put all kinds of markers in, aiming at misleading the reader, but all it does is succeed in setting up expectations that will be dashed. They see it as a plot twist, the reader sees it as violations between the author and reader. (El at comment 8 makes this remark better than I am doing here....)

One person who does surprising and subversive plot elements well is Lois Bujold. There&#039;s a point in her novel, A Civil Campaign, where you wonder what a secondary character is doing off-screen. And based upon my culture, I made all kinds of assumptions. None of which were right. But when the reveal occured, I was really digging where it took the story. It was consistent with the characters (as we knew them) and THEIR culture. It was a  surprise and yet played well with the rules of the Vorkosigan-verse.

Recently, Elizabeth George killed off a major character in her Inspector Lynley mysteries. And got a lot of flak for it. I was personally unhappy with the decision...and I read her justification for it, and still didn&#039;t like it, but didn&#039;t feel betrayed because it was still playing by the rules she sets for her characters. Harsh things happen...has always been a rule in her series. People lose jobs, parents die, fertility issues prevent people from conceiving, racism affects neighbours, and sometimes people lose loved ones in senseless incidents. It was consistent with how she treated the characters.

The writer can get away with a lot, as long as they aren&#039;t betraying the reader by changing the rules. Other than that...anything is fair game.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the author owes the reader nothing specific. I do think it behooves them to try and maintain a certain level of consistency with their characters. This is why For Better or For Worse has been pissing me off for the last few years though&#8230;.Lynn Johnston went to all the trouble to establish her character, Liz, as an independent soul, craving a little adventure, and then after setting her up with guy (even using one of her trademark puns to set him up as Mr. &#8220;Right&#8221; Wright) she then reused a plot line to break them up and return Liz to her white-bread, picket fence suburbia. This cried out against all the character building she&#8217;d done previously, and a lot of fans were pissed and annoyed.  Granted, it&#8217;s LJ&#8217;s story to write, but it was treading old ground and messing with established character traits.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve also seen writers get really focused on their IDEA, to the point where they shoe-horn the character in to fit the story. Or people who put all kinds of markers in, aiming at misleading the reader, but all it does is succeed in setting up expectations that will be dashed. They see it as a plot twist, the reader sees it as violations between the author and reader. (El at comment 8 makes this remark better than I am doing here&#8230;.)</p>
<p>One person who does surprising and subversive plot elements well is Lois Bujold. There&#8217;s a point in her novel, A Civil Campaign, where you wonder what a secondary character is doing off-screen. And based upon my culture, I made all kinds of assumptions. None of which were right. But when the reveal occured, I was really digging where it took the story. It was consistent with the characters (as we knew them) and THEIR culture. It was a  surprise and yet played well with the rules of the Vorkosigan-verse.</p>
<p>Recently, Elizabeth George killed off a major character in her Inspector Lynley mysteries. And got a lot of flak for it. I was personally unhappy with the decision&#8230;and I read her justification for it, and still didn&#8217;t like it, but didn&#8217;t feel betrayed because it was still playing by the rules she sets for her characters. Harsh things happen&#8230;has always been a rule in her series. People lose jobs, parents die, fertility issues prevent people from conceiving, racism affects neighbours, and sometimes people lose loved ones in senseless incidents. It was consistent with how she treated the characters.</p>
<p>The writer can get away with a lot, as long as they aren&#8217;t betraying the reader by changing the rules. Other than that&#8230;anything is fair game.</p>
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		<title>By: Tahsis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Tahsis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 19:49:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Personally I loved Breaking Dawn. I think that the writer needs to write what she/he wants to write. Who are we as fans to say how it should end, from the beginning this is the author&#039;s creation, shouldn&#039;t they be the ones to end it how they think it should end? And also, if we hadn&#039;t gone over every single thing we could possibly think up while theorizing about Breaking Dawn, we would probably be a lot happier. Then we would have no expectations and would be able to read the book with an open mind.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Personally I loved Breaking Dawn. I think that the writer needs to write what she/he wants to write. Who are we as fans to say how it should end, from the beginning this is the author&#8217;s creation, shouldn&#8217;t they be the ones to end it how they think it should end? And also, if we hadn&#8217;t gone over every single thing we could possibly think up while theorizing about Breaking Dawn, we would probably be a lot happier. Then we would have no expectations and would be able to read the book with an open mind.</p>
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		<title>By: Jennifer</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jennifer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 19:00:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t get why shows can&#039;t transition to college. (I don&#039;t watch One Tree Hill, but I do wonder how the &quot;one, two, skip a few&quot; tactic has worked for them.) I thought VM could if anyone could. But I think the network hamhandedness really tied Rob Thomas&#039;s hands behind his back. The budget was so small they couldn&#039;t show more than a few regulars in any episode at one time, cutting Veronica off from her friends, and I think that weakened it. I liked the long mysteries, and the network wanted them shortened/gone. As for Piz...oh, bitch, PLEASE, that boy was a puppy and Veronica is a pit bull, and nobody wanted to watch the inevitable biting of the puppy. I know you have to do the Inevitable Breakup/Makeup crap and you can&#039;t leave V/L together, but...sheesh, find her a better guy to do that with.

Okay, rant over.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t get why shows can&#8217;t transition to college. (I don&#8217;t watch One Tree Hill, but I do wonder how the &#8220;one, two, skip a few&#8221; tactic has worked for them.) I thought VM could if anyone could. But I think the network hamhandedness really tied Rob Thomas&#8217;s hands behind his back. The budget was so small they couldn&#8217;t show more than a few regulars in any episode at one time, cutting Veronica off from her friends, and I think that weakened it. I liked the long mysteries, and the network wanted them shortened/gone. As for Piz&#8230;oh, bitch, PLEASE, that boy was a puppy and Veronica is a pit bull, and nobody wanted to watch the inevitable biting of the puppy. I know you have to do the Inevitable Breakup/Makeup crap and you can&#8217;t leave V/L together, but&#8230;sheesh, find her a better guy to do that with.</p>
<p>Okay, rant over.</p>
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		<title>By: Nicole</title>
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		<dc:creator>Nicole</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 18:48:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>well said justine.
I loved reading Breaking Dawn, and really enjoyed the ending of the series. But... I have to be honest and say that several times while reading it, I thought,&quot;this isn&#039;t how things should happen!&quot; Why do I think I have the right to say how someone else&#039;s story should end? I DON&#039;T, and I really need to remember that. I&#039;m not usually so opinionated about someone&#039;s writing, I finally realized why Breaking Dawn was different. I had expectations, I feel into the trap of making predictions and reading other people&#039;s theories, as I&#039;m sure so many who were disappointed did as well.
As fun as it was to discuss what I thought would happen, there was definetly a price to pay when it came to my reading experience. Maybe some can theorize and not be disappointed when the author thinks nothing like you do, but I now know that theorizing is not for me. I think there would be a lot less negative reviews of Breaking Dawn if the fandom hadn&#039;t been so adament about predicting every single plot point. Having expectations isn&#039;t wrong, but too many can ruin part of the reading experience.
Breaking Dawn was amazing, I really wish I hadn&#039;t made so many predictions.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>well said justine.<br />
I loved reading Breaking Dawn, and really enjoyed the ending of the series. But&#8230; I have to be honest and say that several times while reading it, I thought,&#8221;this isn&#8217;t how things should happen!&#8221; Why do I think I have the right to say how someone else&#8217;s story should end? I DON&#8217;T, and I really need to remember that. I&#8217;m not usually so opinionated about someone&#8217;s writing, I finally realized why Breaking Dawn was different. I had expectations, I feel into the trap of making predictions and reading other people&#8217;s theories, as I&#8217;m sure so many who were disappointed did as well.<br />
As fun as it was to discuss what I thought would happen, there was definetly a price to pay when it came to my reading experience. Maybe some can theorize and not be disappointed when the author thinks nothing like you do, but I now know that theorizing is not for me. I think there would be a lot less negative reviews of Breaking Dawn if the fandom hadn&#8217;t been so adament about predicting every single plot point. Having expectations isn&#8217;t wrong, but too many can ruin part of the reading experience.<br />
Breaking Dawn was amazing, I really wish I hadn&#8217;t made so many predictions.</p>
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		<title>By: Leahr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Leahr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 18:23:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just finished reading Breaking Dawn about an hour ago. I&#039;m not sure what ending everyone else wanted. I thought it was fine. I don&#039;t read Stephenie Meyer for plot, to tell the truth. I like her compelling writing style and characterizations. I liked how she managed the POVs of all the characters- the switch to Jacob went off perfectly. Her writing was not as polished as its been in the last 3 books, though- could have used more grace and less cliche, especially in the dialogue in the middle of the book.

As for the reader-writer contract- the writer owes a reader nothing unless it pleases his/her ego. But. The writer must write books that people want to read. Or nothing will sell and then what kind of authorhood is that? Stephenie Meyer is not having that problem at this point. When you are that high on the bestseller list you are presumably doing enough right to not have to worry about fans with different taste than yours. Because they did still buy the book, apparently.She can write the book however she wants. And I thought she did a fairly good job of it.

(This may be overly cynical. I can&#039;t see a famous author not caring to the level that they want to write something many readers might hate, but as Justine has said before, authors are thin-skinned beasties.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just finished reading Breaking Dawn about an hour ago. I&#8217;m not sure what ending everyone else wanted. I thought it was fine. I don&#8217;t read Stephenie Meyer for plot, to tell the truth. I like her compelling writing style and characterizations. I liked how she managed the POVs of all the characters- the switch to Jacob went off perfectly. Her writing was not as polished as its been in the last 3 books, though- could have used more grace and less cliche, especially in the dialogue in the middle of the book.</p>
<p>As for the reader-writer contract- the writer owes a reader nothing unless it pleases his/her ego. But. The writer must write books that people want to read. Or nothing will sell and then what kind of authorhood is that? Stephenie Meyer is not having that problem at this point. When you are that high on the bestseller list you are presumably doing enough right to not have to worry about fans with different taste than yours. Because they did still buy the book, apparently.She can write the book however she wants. And I thought she did a fairly good job of it.</p>
<p>(This may be overly cynical. I can&#8217;t see a famous author not caring to the level that they want to write something many readers might hate, but as Justine has said before, authors are thin-skinned beasties.)</p>
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		<title>By: JGS</title>
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		<dc:creator>JGS</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 17:59:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here&#039;s a phrase I never thought I would say:

I agree with Corey Feldman :)

I don&#039;t think authors &lt;i&gt;owe&lt;/i&gt; readers anything. Nothing at all. Art&#039;s only responsibility is to itself.

But.

Readers don&#039;t owe authors anything either. Piss on your readers and they&#039;ll stop buying your books.

I think it&#039;s a dilemma artists of all stripes face: how do you balance what&#039;s in your heart (avant-garde free-jazz skronk) and what your audience expects (upbeat summery pop tunes)?

Of course, just phoning it in is another quick route to losing your fanbase (and it lacks even the meager cover of artistic integrity to keep you warm during those long, cold, fan-less nights).

But regardless of &lt;i&gt;why&lt;/i&gt; the artist has done it, I think their only responsibility is to their own vision. Even if I hate hate hate it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s a phrase I never thought I would say:</p>
<p>I agree with Corey Feldman <img src='http://justinelarbalestier.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think authors <i>owe</i> readers anything. Nothing at all. Art&#8217;s only responsibility is to itself.</p>
<p>But.</p>
<p>Readers don&#8217;t owe authors anything either. Piss on your readers and they&#8217;ll stop buying your books.</p>
<p>I think it&#8217;s a dilemma artists of all stripes face: how do you balance what&#8217;s in your heart (avant-garde free-jazz skronk) and what your audience expects (upbeat summery pop tunes)?</p>
<p>Of course, just phoning it in is another quick route to losing your fanbase (and it lacks even the meager cover of artistic integrity to keep you warm during those long, cold, fan-less nights).</p>
<p>But regardless of <i>why</i> the artist has done it, I think their only responsibility is to their own vision. Even if I hate hate hate it.</p>
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		<title>By: grace</title>
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		<dc:creator>grace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 17:38:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I do think writers owe readers. They owe readers a good book. I don&#039;t care if you end the book the way I wanted you to, or if my favorite character dies, or if a giant fish suddenly falls out of the sky and kills the bad guy, as long as it is well done. (I mean I will &lt;i&gt;care&lt;/i&gt; if you kill my favorite character, but I will care in a good way. with tears.)

Basically, you owe me an ending as good as the beginning that drew me in.

That&#039;s it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I do think writers owe readers. They owe readers a good book. I don&#8217;t care if you end the book the way I wanted you to, or if my favorite character dies, or if a giant fish suddenly falls out of the sky and kills the bad guy, as long as it is well done. (I mean I will <i>care</i> if you kill my favorite character, but I will care in a good way. with tears.)</p>
<p>Basically, you owe me an ending as good as the beginning that drew me in.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s it.</p>
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		<title>By: kris</title>
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		<dc:creator>kris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 17:37:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree with Anidori-Isilee; it was an extremely long epilogue, not a book in the sense readers are used to.  

BD seemed to give everyone a happy ending; a few too many joyous people for well over 700 pages.   (Okay, there were a select few affected by pain/death/etc.)  It could be the conditioning of the Harry Potter series where anyone can die, no one is off limits, causing me to want more conflict, but I think it&#039;s just the need for conflict with consequences.  

Authors may not owe readers a certain story, but they shouldn&#039;t kill fans viewpoints of them by writing freakishly strange sap either. 

On a side note I didn&#039;t HATE the book, I just feel it could have been MUCH better had the time been spent on it.  I think she was killing herself trying to get the Host out as well as BD in one year. She never should have overextended.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree with Anidori-Isilee; it was an extremely long epilogue, not a book in the sense readers are used to.  </p>
<p>BD seemed to give everyone a happy ending; a few too many joyous people for well over 700 pages.   (Okay, there were a select few affected by pain/death/etc.)  It could be the conditioning of the Harry Potter series where anyone can die, no one is off limits, causing me to want more conflict, but I think it&#8217;s just the need for conflict with consequences.  </p>
<p>Authors may not owe readers a certain story, but they shouldn&#8217;t kill fans viewpoints of them by writing freakishly strange sap either. </p>
<p>On a side note I didn&#8217;t HATE the book, I just feel it could have been MUCH better had the time been spent on it.  I think she was killing herself trying to get the Host out as well as BD in one year. She never should have overextended.</p>
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		<title>By: Molly</title>
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		<dc:creator>Molly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 16:19:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;i&gt;Veronica Mars&lt;/i&gt; season three wasn&#039;t THAT bad! I mean, yes, I&#039;d like to throttle &quot;Piz&quot; (a name so terrible it deserves quotation marks), and yes, it needed a better central plot, but ... there were some moments in there. There were definitely some moments.

High school shows just seem unable to make it to college. Sniffle. I do wish they&#039;d managed to convince the powers that be to let them do the four-years-later, Veronica-at-the-FBI fourth season, though.

I miss my shows. And you&#039;re horrifying me with this shark-jumping talk about &lt;i&gt;Weeds&lt;/i&gt;. I&#039;m almost to the end of season three and I still love Nancy.

/end TV-chatter hijack of interesting discussion thread. ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><i>Veronica Mars</i> season three wasn&#8217;t THAT bad! I mean, yes, I&#8217;d like to throttle &#8220;Piz&#8221; (a name so terrible it deserves quotation marks), and yes, it needed a better central plot, but &#8230; there were some moments in there. There were definitely some moments.</p>
<p>High school shows just seem unable to make it to college. Sniffle. I do wish they&#8217;d managed to convince the powers that be to let them do the four-years-later, Veronica-at-the-FBI fourth season, though.</p>
<p>I miss my shows. And you&#8217;re horrifying me with this shark-jumping talk about <i>Weeds</i>. I&#8217;m almost to the end of season three and I still love Nancy.</p>
<p>/end TV-chatter hijack of interesting discussion thread. <img src='http://justinelarbalestier.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Stephanie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Stephanie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 06 Aug 2008 16:00:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Meyer does not have a contract with her readers, but she does have one with her publisher, and I have to wonder what the editor was thinking when she accepted the manuscript. &quot;How can I get this printed faster?&quot; seems to have won over &quot;Hey, that&#039;s awkward how the backstory got shoehorned in,&quot; and &quot;Wow, that character just did a 180,&quot; and &quot;Why are there no consequences to the choices that have been building up over the last three books?&quot; Which are the questions I&#039;d expect any editor to ask when confronted with such a train wreck of a book. 

Buffy season 7 gets points for the Anya episode, at least!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Meyer does not have a contract with her readers, but she does have one with her publisher, and I have to wonder what the editor was thinking when she accepted the manuscript. &#8220;How can I get this printed faster?&#8221; seems to have won over &#8220;Hey, that&#8217;s awkward how the backstory got shoehorned in,&#8221; and &#8220;Wow, that character just did a 180,&#8221; and &#8220;Why are there no consequences to the choices that have been building up over the last three books?&#8221; Which are the questions I&#8217;d expect any editor to ask when confronted with such a train wreck of a book. </p>
<p>Buffy season 7 gets points for the Anya episode, at least!</p>
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